One of the favourite student questions for a course like this is: well, it's fine
for us to analyse this text in this way, but does the author know about what we
claim to be in the text? Well, it depends: the author may not know it, may be
semi-conscious of it, or may know it very well indeed, better than us! Well,
even if the author does not know about it, this does not preclude a linguistic
analysis of the text, unless we believe that the author's intention, whether
realised or unrealised, is all that matters. Rhyme is
one area where the author may know about the devices that he uses very
well, even if the terms used are different, and this becomes apparent when the device is used persistently in the
text. I was looking at the Wikipedia entry on rapping and this is what it says
about rhyme styles
in rap:
In classical poetry, rhymes that span many syllables are often considered
whimsical, but in hip hop the ability to construct raps with large sets of
rhyming syllables is valued. Rap can contain any and all forms of rhyme
found in classical poetry such as
consonance,
assonance,
half
rhyme, or
internal rhyme.
Well, another favourite question (perhaps more a comment), but this time more
specific to the learning of the more technical features of poetry, is why study
them at all, when we are not going to teach them to kids? You see (the reasoning
goes!), kids don't
like the technicalities of poetry writing, such as rhyme -- they prefer the
barren joy (sans technicalities) of poetry as it is! Hmm! Anyway, I am still
annoyed by my secondary school teachers for not teaching me what rhyme was, or
not bothering about what it was, even when it appeared, in patterned
persistence, in the poetry they taught. Well I eventually learned about it
outside school, and a whole load of other technical devices as well. I don't
think the attitude of some secondary teachers towards the technicalities of poetry
has changed.
Thank God we have rap and hip-hop today, where rhyme and other technicalities
are exploited to the hilt. Where else can you find people bothering about
mosaic rhymes,
making triple rhymes (which were
previously thought to be silly) serious, or even, to resort to
multi-syllable rhymes to
make the meaning of their words more memorable? Yes, they do take poetic
tongue twisters seriously. And rhyme is so important to Eminem, for
instance, that he makes changes to his English to
make words that
don't rhyme, rhyme. Outside rap, not all songs rhyme perfectly of course,
but their authors still
resort to other technicalities of poetry writing, including, well, imperfect
rhymes. So the technicalities are still alive in the lyrics of popular music
today. Maybe that's why some secondary teachers find they shouldn't be dealing with
them, as they have an innate fear of the popular, thinking that students should
instead grab the naked content of poetry without knowing about the technicalities
that poetry is clothed in. To me, this is not a good way of teaching and
learning the language of poetry. Indeed, learning the technicalities will make
poetry more relevant to students' everyday lives, when they realise that they
could apply some of the concepts to the songs they listen to on the radio or on
their mp3 players. A content only approach to poetry will result in an unnecessary
and unnatural split in the students' minds between the poetry they learn at
school and the lyrics of the songs they listen to or sing.